Friday, July 25, 2014

Rainbow writers

Falcon flap flap flapped flapety flap. Then he saw a creature crawling through the forest. Falcon flue acros the windy swirling sky. He opened his claws like a shark. His mouth like a vampire then suddenly something pushed him back? I was the swirling sky going the other way. Falcon checked if he was still brighter then the sun. Then the he checked if he was as colourful as a peacock. But sadly the mud was stuck to falcon. But when he flew up in to the sky, the mud flicked off falcon.


1 comment:

  1. I like your similes they make it interesting.
    Why did you choose to write about that?

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