Wednesday, August 27, 2014

ASIAN PIG WHALE 

HE WAS SWIMMING THROUGH THE SEA HE SORE 
A WHALE SHARK NEXT SECOND HE WAS IN MY 
BELLY 
HE DID PLOP AND WENT BOP I CAN SEE A TATTOO SHOP 




4 comments:

  1. nice maz it was very funny but next time can you check your spelling before posting something on the blog

    soz the last one was me but i mistakely put it as kara

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  2. funny poem Maz.
    Maybe next time you can make the title bigger so you know it is the title.
    And you could maybe make it make more sense
    Ethynn

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  3. nice poem maz that was funny next time you should check your spelling but overall it was the funniest poem ever
    by joE seabrook

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  4. nice poem Maz that was funny but next time work on spelling and could you write a bit more.
    Maritha

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