Tuesday, August 12, 2014

Poem on horses!



Horses galloping side to side

While I Enjoying the ride

 while I fly Over a jump

although there's a little bump

By Brooke

2 comments:

  1. Brooke you used great rhyming words. Next time try making it longer and maybe start with what the weathers like and where you are riding. In the second line you might reword it because it doesn't make sense.
    Charlotte

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  2. You have used lots of rhyming words next time work on using a diff`t word insted of what different
    Aria.

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