Wednesday, August 27, 2014

The cat and his bat

THE CAT AND HIS BAT!

The cat with his bat was sleeping on his flat mat! 
Then the very fat rat that was eating a rap sat on the
cats bat and deised to take a nap!

 When the cat awock from his nap saw the fat rat on his bat, 
so he lifted his bad so the rat would fall flat. 
Then the cat hit the rat with his bat.
 KERSPLAT! 

Now the fat rat will never again eat a rap and
 take a nap on the mat were the cat and his bat nap!
The end 

4 comments:

  1. nice rhyming next time can you please make a bit of sense

    by joe

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  2. nice rhyming and describing words but next could you work on using more detail and making more sense in one part but other than that it was an AMAZING POEM!

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  3. Nice job in rhyming the words. Next time you make a bit more sense because you missed some letters that had to be put in

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