Friday, June 6, 2014

Once upon a time...

Once upon a time a slightly eye changing story in story land there were 3 very dumb witches who always got muddled up into which story they were from. The names of these witches were Candy Witch from Hansel and Gretel, The Wicked Witch of the West from the Wonderful Wizard of Oz and the Grand High Witch from the witches. One day the witches got so muddled up they just got muddled up. The Grand High Witch thought she was from Hansel and Gretel, The Wicked Witch of the West thought she was from The Witches and the Candy witch thought she was from the Wonderful wizard of Oz. The story land fairy said to them "If you can't remember which story you are from by tomorrow you will set a spell over the whole land and you will turn into la la loopsy lands slaves." The witches soon discussed a plan and set off to the library. When they got there they found out that the library was closed for repairs. So after hours of moaning and complaining to the builder they went to la la loopsy land. As they arrived they saw doll faces everywhere. They were just about to enter when a loud voice boomed over the loud speaker. "Halt! What do you think you're doing?" But before the witches could answer the guard questioned them. "What are you doing without button eyes?" "Umm, umm. Well we don't know." Said the witches. The guard who's name was Sergeant Buffalo Face (who's face looked like a buffalo) soon complained to the witches and told them that they would have to get buttons sewn in place of their eyes. The witches gasped and went off crying to their mummy (who's name was Maleficiant) who told them that they deserved to get buttons for eyes. The 3 witches were soon sent off to deliver a letter to Sergeant Buffalo Face. When they got there the Sergeant read the letter and took them off to jail. Here's what the letter said...

Dear Sergeant Buffalo Face,
Three witches called Candy Witch, The Wicked Witch of the West and The Grand High Witch need their eyes to be replaced with buttons.
Sincerely Maleficiant. 

The Sergeant sent for the queen stitcher and asked her to give the witches buttons for eyes. 673,478,832 hours later the witches were strapped down ready to have buttons for eyes. Bumblebee the queen stitcher started the complicated process of changing the witches eyes to buttons. Very soon the fairy of story land came along and told the witches that they are going to become la la loopsy lands slaves (because the witches were so dumb they still didn't know which story they were from). So 0.1 of a second later they were turned into la la loopsy lands slaves. 
THE END
By Charlotte.C

2 comments:

  1. Good spelling Charlotte I really liked your story it was great. You had great punctuation to. :)

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  2. Wow brilliant adjectives Charlotte. I have nothing for you to work on.
    Luke

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